[Blossom]

When Father was just a little lad
He only did things that made him glad;
In company or just alone
He loved to chew on a bone

 

[Vinylted]

When Father was just a little lad
He only did things that made him glad;
In company or just alone
He loved to chew on a bone,
Family was glad he grew out of that fad..

new start
People used to ride gadgets called Vespas'

 

[Vinylted]

sigh..
People used to ride gadgets called Vespas'
All dressed as though they were sherpas;



next lines please (shorter and rhyming together) (Did rhyming Vespa scare everyone off... sorry..

 

[Blossom]

People used to ride gadgets called Vespas'
All dressed as though they were sherpas;
Vespa scooter , bright blue

 

[Vinylted]

People used to ride gadgets called Vespas'
All dressed as though they were sherpas;
Vespa scooter , bright blue
That spluttered, on cue,

Last line rhyming with 1 & 2.

 

[Maddison Dwyer]

People used to ride gadgets called Vespas'
All dressed as though they were sherpas;
Vespa scooter , bright blue
That spluttered, on cue,
and made a ridiculous noice like 'derpa'

@Vinylted @Blossom a really hard one to finish let's start another...

She was riding down the avenue,

(next line)

 

[Placid]

She was riding down the avenue,
Feeling great in her gown of blue


next line shorter but not rhyming

 

[Vinylted]

She was riding down the avenue,
Feeling great in her gown of blue;
Hair blowing in the wind


next line similar length & rhyming with line 3... (Well done with with previous one Maddie)

 

[Placid]

She was riding down the avenue,
Feeling great in her gown of blue;
Hair blowing in the wind
Not even bobby pinned


and last line rhyming with avenue/blue

 

[Vinylted]

She was riding down the avenue
Feeling great in her gown of blue;
Hair blowing in the wind
Not even bobby pinned,
Pedestrians all marvelled at the view.

The gown fitted like a second skin


next line rhyming with first. (maybe time to to get a little risque?)

 

[Blossom]

The gown fitted like a second skin
Cos Thelma was so gorgeously slim

 

[Vinylted]

The gown fitted like a second skin
Cos Thelma was so gorgeously slim;
Except for her curves


New line rhyming with previous...

 

[Blossom]

• #52

The gown fitted like a second skin
Cos Thelma was so gorgeously slim;
Except for her curves
One definitely concurs

 

[Placid]

The gown fitted like a second skin
Cos Thelma was so gorgeously slim;
Except for her curves
One definitely concurs
That any male heart she could win.


There was a young man from Swan Hill

next line similar length and rhymes with hill

 

[Vinylted]

There was a young man from Swan Hill
Who adored a young lady called Jill;


Next line shorter & not rhyming with lines 1 & 2..

 

[Placid]

There was a young man from Swan Hill
Who adored a young lady called Jill;
They were a good match

next line short and rhymes with match

 

[Vinylted]

There was a young man from Swan Hill
Who adored a young lady called Jill;
They were a good match
So a plan he did hatch,


Last line finishing story ... with humour... rhyming with lines 1 & 2..

 

[Maddison Dwyer]

There was a young man from Swan Hill
Who adored a young lady called Jill;
They were a good match
So a plan he did hatch,
But then she ran off with crazy Bill!

 

[Vinylted]

A nice twist at the end Maddie, well done..

New one..

But did crazy Bill know Jill was on the pill?


Next line please, rhyming

 

[Placid]

But did crazy Bill know Jill was on the pill?
Or was he just a bit of a dill