[Placid]

Vinylted loved to spend time in his shed
Where all his madcap ideas are bred;
He can be quite a whizz
When he's not in a tizz

and last line please (rhyming with bred/shed)

 

[Vinylted]

Vinylted loved to spend time in his shed
Where all his madcap ideas are bred;
He can be quite a whizz
When he's not in a tizz,
Alas the action was all in his head:

 

[Maddison Dwyer]

Vinylted loved to spend time in his shed
Where all his madcap ideas are bred;
He can be quite a whizz
When he's not in a tizz,
Alas the action was all in his head:
Even when he was lying in bed!

 

[Vinylted]

Young Blossom loved to sit in her garden


next line please..

Vinylted loved to spend time in his shed
Where all his madcap ideas are bred;
He can be quite a whizz
When he's not in a tizz,
Even when he was lying in bed!

G'day actually I reckon your last line was better than mine. So I've replaced it with yours thus completing that limerick, there is a new one below have a go at the second line rhyming with the first and a similar length. xx

 

[Placid]

Young Blossom loved to sit in her garden
Hoping that her arteries don't harden




new line please (shorter and not rhyming with harden)

 

[Vinylted]

Young Blossom loved to sit in her garden
Hoping that her arteries don't harden;
With her clippers in hand


New line, (similar length, and rhyming with hand..)

 

[Maddison Dwyer]

Young Blossom loved to sit in her garden
Hoping that her arteries don't harden;
With her clippers in hand
She went to cut a single strand

 

[Vinylted]

Young Blossom loved to sit in her garden
Hoping that her arteries don't harden;
With her clippers in hand
She went to cut a single strand,
But got the lot! begging your pardon:

 

[Vinylted]

Maddie's a budding limerick poet


next line please..

 

[Placid]

Maddie's a budding limerick poet
The problem is, she doesn't know it.


next line please (shorter and not rhyming with poet)

 

[Vinylted]

Maddie's a budding limerick poet
The problem is, she doesn't know it;
She's learning so quick

Next line (similar length & rhyming..)

 

[Placid]

Maddie's a budding limerick poet
The problem is, she doesn't know it;
She's learning so quick
She gives us the flick


last line please (rhyming with poet)

 

[Maddison Dwyer]

Maddie's a budding limerick poet
The problem is, she doesn't know it;
She's learning so quick
She gives us the flick
She still doesn't know how to show it!

I hope that's right! I'm so embarrassed it's about me! I wouldn't say I'm a budding limerick poet yet, but I'm working on it!

 

[Vinylted]

Well done Maddie! you are getting along fine..

Now a new starter...

People can have lots of fun in a forum

now the next line....

 

[Blossom]

People can have lots of fun in a forum
Having a laugh, but with some decorum

 

[Placid]

People can have lots of fun in a forum
Having a laugh, but with some decorum
It's pretty easy to make a post


next line please (similar length rhyming with post)

 

[Vinylted]

People can have lots of fun in a forum
Having a laugh, but with some decorum;
It's pretty easy to make a post
So don't be afraid to just boast,


Last line rhyming with first two...

 

[Blossom]

People can have lots of fun in a forum
Having a laugh, but with some decorum;
It's pretty easy to make a post
So don't be afraid to just boast,
In fact , just carry on in ad nauseam


When Father was just a little lad

 

[Placid]

When Father was just a little lad
He only did things that made him glad


next line please, shorter and not rhyming with lad/glad

 

[Vinylted]

When Father was just a little lad
He only did things that made him glad;
In company or just alone


next line similar length rhyming with alone..